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When the convoy led by Gu Changchuan arrived, Su Wan was standing at the main entrance of the research center, the hem of her white coat fluttering slightly in the wind, her face full of barely suppressed excitement and radiance.

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When the convoy led by Gu Changchuan arrived, Su Wan was standing at the entrance of the research center. The hem of her white lab coat fluttered slightly in the wind, and her face was full of excitement and energy she could barely suppress.

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Relying on the experimental research data on many mutants accumulated over this period, the old data from the Shaoguang Laboratory of the Cold Lake Research Institute, and the analysis of Soaring Serpent tissue samples.

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Relying on the experimental research data on many mutants accumulated during this period, the old data from the Shaoguang Laboratory of the Cold Lake Research Institute, and analysis of samples from Soaring Serpent tissue,

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With the help of the new laboratory's various ultra-high-standard equipment, she had finally completed the human enhancement agent whose research process had been interrupted by the disaster before it could be finished.

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with the help of the new laboratory’s various ultra-high-level equipment, she had finally completed the human enhancement agent whose research progress had been interrupted by the disaster before it could be finished.

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"Hehe! You finally made it!" Seeing Gu Changchuan, her eyes were full of the excitement of finally finding someone she could show off her super intelligence to.

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“Hehe! You finally made it!” Seeing Gu Changchuan, her eyes were full of the excitement of finally finding someone she could show off her super intelligence to.

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"For that 'good stuff' you mentioned, we made a huge detour!" Gu Changchuan said half-jokingly, his gaze involuntarily drawn to the test tube in her hand that glowed with a faint blue sheen.

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“For your ‘good stuff,’ we went way out of our way!” Gu Changchuan said half-jokingly, his gaze involuntarily drawn to the test tube in her hand shimmering with a faint blue luster.

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"So this is that enhancement agent you mentioned?" Gu Changchuan asked curiously, then he hesitated. "How were the clinical trial results? There won't be any hidden dangers, right?"

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“So this is the enhancement agent you mentioned?” Gu Changchuan asked curiously, then hesitated. “How were the clinical trial results? There aren’t any hidden dangers, are there?”

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"Don't worry! I'm not so insane as to disregard human lives," Su Wan said with a smile. "Animal testing has already completed three full rounds, and clinical trials have all shown no obvious biological toxicity. Safety and stability are both within controllable ranges.

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“Don’t worry! I haven’t become so deranged as to treat human lives as nothing,” Su Wan said with a smile. “Animal trials have already run three rounds, and clinical trials have shown no obvious biological toxicity. Safety and stability are both within controllable ranges,

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And relying on verification with the lab's equipment, I can theoretically guarantee it very likely won't have problems."

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“and with verification using the laboratory equipment, I can guarantee theoretically that it most likely won’t have problems.”

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"Professor Su, I didn't mean it that way!" Gu Changchuan frowned, sounding somewhat helpless.

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After saying this, Su Wan actually injected the reagent in her hand into a vein in her own arm with a syringe, right in front of everyone.

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"I know," Su Wan waved her hand, her tone full of unquestionable confidence. "But I have sufficient confidence in my work. And if I don't dare use it myself, what right do I have to ask you to try it?"

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“Professor Su, that’s not what I meant!” Gu Changchuan frowned, his tone somewhat helpless.

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Then her body suddenly swayed, but she quickly steadied herself and explained to the worried onlookers, "It's nothing. Just a bit of fever. It's a normal reaction."

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“I know,” Su Wan waved a hand, her tone full of confidence that brooked no doubt. “But I have enough confidence in my work. And if I don’t dare use it myself, what right do I have to ask you all to try it?”

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"Simply put, after injection, muscle fiber density, bone hardness, cardiopulmonary efficiency, endurance, and neural reaction speed all improve comprehensively; the extent ranges from about 50 to 80 percent, with some fluctuation due to individual differences."

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Then her body suddenly swayed, but she quickly steadied herself and explained to the worried crowd: “It’s nothing, just a bit of high fever. It’s a normal reaction.”

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She paused and added, "The side effect is a high fever within 24 hours after injection, with body temperature reaching up to 41 degrees Celsius.

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“Simply put, after injection, the body’s muscle fiber density, bone hardness, cardiopulmonary efficiency, stamina level, and nerve reaction speed will all receive comprehensive improvement;

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But unlike an ordinary fever, this poses no danger to life. It subsides on its own after 6 to 8 hours, followed by an adaptation period of 3 to 5 days."

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“the increase is roughly between fifty and eighty percent, varying with individual differences.”

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"Of course, only the first dose has the most obvious effect. Afterward, even if injected again, it merely maintains the new physical state and accelerates recovery; its effect is even inferior to the high-efficiency tissue repair agent."

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She paused, then added: “The side effect is a high fever within twenty-four hours after injection, with body temperature reaching as high as forty-one degrees.

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"Too bad it can't stack indefinitely." At that point, Su Wan spread her hands and sighed in mock regret, except the corners of her mouth never actually went down.

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“But unlike an ordinary fever, it won’t be life-threatening. It will subside on its own after six to eight hours, followed by a three-to-five-day adaptation period.”

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The entrance fell silent for a moment. Everyone was somewhat stunned by the effect.

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“Of course, only the first dose has the most obvious effect. Afterward, even if it is injected again, it will only maintain the new physical state and speed up recovery. In fact, its effect is not even as good as the high-efficiency tissue repair agent.”

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"This is already incredible enough!" After a long silence, Gu Changchuan was the first to break it, sighing sincerely. "If it could stack, that would really be something."

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“What a pity it can’t stack indefinitely.” At that, Su Wan spread her hands and sighed with feigned helplessness, but the corners of her mouth never came down at all.

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[I've already reviewed the ingredient formula and synthesis route.]

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For a moment, the entrance fell completely silent. Everyone was somewhat dazed by the impact.

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At that moment, Ling Yu's voice also came through the speaker at the entrance. [According to my calculations, the current synthesis steps are too numerous and not the optimal route. The purity is also less than ideal; there is a great deal of room for optimization.

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“This is already incredible!” After a long while, Gu Changchuan was the first to break the silence, exclaiming sincerely, “If this could stack, that would be insane!”

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I've already provided an optimized plan that can increase synthesis efficiency by about four times, raise purity by two percentage points, and also lower the fever peak in the side effects by about half a degree.]

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[I’ve already reviewed the ingredient formula and synthesis route.]

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[Su Wan, I've already sent the specific plan and data to your computer.]

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At that moment, Ling Yu’s voice came through the speaker at the entrance. [According to my deductions, the current synthesis has too many steps, and it isn’t the optimal route. Purity also isn’t ideal, so there is a lot of room for optimization.

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"Oh, I see," Su Wan's mouth immediately turned downward. Her smug expression vanished, and her tone carried a bit of resentment. "This is why I hate all beings smarter and more knowledgeable than me."

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On my end, I’ve already produced an optimized plan that can improve synthesis efficiency by about four times, raise purity by two percentage points, and also lower the fever peak in the side effects by about half a degree.]

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[Don't say that. If you hadn't developed the prototype, I wouldn't have been able to produce an optimization plan so quickly. We've achieved this together.] Ling Yu hastily reassured her, lest he strike too hard a blow to this talented biology scholar.

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[Su Wan, I’ve already sent the specific plan and data to your computer.]

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In fact, what he said was the truth. [Basic Biological Enhancement Technology (Lv.1)] had several prerequisite biology nodes, costing quite a lot of civilization points.

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“Oh, I see.” Su Wan’s lips immediately turned downward, her smug expression vanishing all at once, and her voice carried resentment. “This is why I hate everything smarter than me and everything that knows more than I do.”

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Although with Ling Yu's current reserves of civilization points, he could force his way through them, the cost-effectiveness of doing so would be too low.

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[Don’t say that. If you hadn’t researched the prototype, I couldn’t have produced an optimized plan so quickly. We should call it mutual achievement.] Ling Yu hastily soothed her, so as not to strike too great a blow to this gifted scholar of biology.

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He still had to reserve his civilization points for a key trump card to deal with possible extreme situations in the future, so he couldn't spend them too casually.

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In fact, what he said was also the truth. The [Basic Biological Enhancement Technology (Lv.1)] had several prerequisite biology nodes, and they required quite a lot of civilization points.

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"Heh!" Su Wan rolled her eyes at the camera. Then she waved at Gu Changchuan and the others, turned, and walked back into the research center.

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Although with Ling Yu’s current civilization point reserves, it wasn’t impossible for him to forcibly unlock them, but doing so would have been very poor value.

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"I'm going back to see what this new production plan is all about and try to get the first batch of product ready for you to use."

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His civilization points still had to be kept in reserve as a critical trump card to deal with extreme situations that might appear in the future, so he couldn’t spend them too casually.

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Afterward, following discussion with Ling Yu, half an hour later, the production process for the standard-type Level 1 physique enhancement agent was finally settled.

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“Heh!” Su Wan rolled her eyes at the camera, then waved at Gu Changchuan and the others, turned, and walked back into the research center.

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Considering production efficiency and stability, there were currently two main synthesis routes:

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“I’m going back to see what this new production plan is all about, and try to get the first batch of product made for you all to use.”

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First, the biological synthesis route.

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Afterward, following discussion with Ling Yu, half an hour later, the production process for the standard-type Level 1 physique enhancement agent was finally settled.

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Gene-editing technology would be used to modify specific cell lines, turning them into engineered bacterial strains that met requirements and continuously secreted one of the key active ingredients that was the most difficult to synthesize in the agent.

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Considering production efficiency and stability, there were currently two main synthesis routes:

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This route had high yield and low cost, but it involved culturing living organisms, and in theory there was ultimately a potential risk of loss of control.

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First, a biosynthesis route.

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Therefore, this production line would be entirely deployed inside the research center in Lishan City.

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Gene-editing technology would be used to modify specific cell lines and turn them into engineered bacterial strains meeting the requirements, which would continuously secrete one of the key active ingredients in the agent that was most difficult to synthesize.

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Here, the biosafety-level protective measures were so comprehensive as to be absurd. Even if the culture mutated, the danger could be nipped in the bud at the first moment.

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This route had high output and low cost, but because it involved culturing living organisms, there was ultimately a potential risk of loss of control in theory.

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Second, the purely chemical synthesis route.

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Therefore, this production line would be fully deployed inside the research center in Lishan City.

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Starting from basic chemical raw materials and undergoing dozens of complex reaction steps, the final product would be synthesized entirely through industrial means.

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The biosafety-level protective measures here were absurdly thorough. Even if the cultures mutated, the danger could be strangled in the cradle at the first moment.

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This route had many steps, high energy consumption, and high equipment requirements, but its advantages were stability, controllability, and no risk of biological contamination. It could be completely controlled by Ling Yu, so it was also worth building.

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Second, a purely chemical synthesis route.

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In the future, this line would be laid directly in the chemical production area of Anlan District, which would also make it convenient to supply power directly from the nuclear power station.

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Starting from basic chemical raw materials and passing through dozens of complex reactions, the final product would be synthesized entirely by industrial means.

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The two lines would be advanced simultaneously and serve as backups for each other.

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This route had many steps, high energy consumption, and high equipment requirements, but its advantages were stability, controllability, and the absence of biological contamination risk. It could be completely controlled by Ling Yu, so it was also meaningful to build.

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This line would later be laid directly in the chemical production area of Anlan District, making it convenient to supply power directly from the nuclear power station.

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One week later.

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The two lines would be advanced simultaneously and serve as backups for each other.

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Lishan City, research center.

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152 members of Zero Sequence, after three days of baseline physical data collection, completed their injections of the standard-type Level 1 physique enhancement agent in batches.

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One week later.

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The fever arrived on schedule and subsided on schedule.

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Lishan City, research center.

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After the enhancement was complete, Gu Changchuan's first sensation was "lightness."

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One hundred fifty-two members of Zero Sequence, after three days of baseline physical data collection, had completed their injections of the standard-type Level 1 physique enhancement agent in batches.

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His body felt very light, as if he could leap into the sky in one bound.

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The high fevers arrived on schedule and subsided on schedule.

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Then he really did jump, and knocked a large bump onto his head.

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When the enhancement was complete, Gu Changchuan’s first sensation was “lightness.”

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To his relief, at that morning's assembly there were quite a few people with bumps on their heads just like him, so his Team Leader dignity was barely preserved.

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His body felt very light, so light that he felt as if he could leap all the way into the sky.

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After reexamination, the entire team was in very good condition, and their physical fitness test data had comprehensively broken through the limits of ordinary people.

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Then he really did jump, and knocked a large bump onto his head.

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Reaction speed, muscle explosive power, and cardiopulmonary endurance had each made a qualitative leap.

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But to his relief, at the morning assembly there were quite a few people with bumps on their heads just like him, so his Team Leader dignity was at least preserved.

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And according to Su Wan's personal experience, she could confirm that even her mind worked much faster than before, and her sleep was more efficient, so she no longer needed to spend the whole night sleeping.

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After reexamination, the entire team was in very good condition, and their physical fitness test data had comprehensively broken through the limits of ordinary people.

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However, Ling Yu was very skeptical of this point. Could she be sure it wasn't self-consolation to justify staying up late?

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Reaction speed, muscle explosive power, cardiopulmonary endurance—each one had made a qualitative leap.

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But Su Wan paid no heed to this mysterious AI's doubts. At that moment, looking at the cognitive test data, her mind had already turned to another matter:

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And according to Su Wan’s personal experience, she could confirm that even her mind was working much faster than before, and her sleep was more efficient, no longer requiring the whole night.

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"Wonderful... If this kind of enhancement generally increases the activity of neurons in the cerebral cortex, then that group of survivors in Linwu City might be saved!"

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However, Ling Yu was very skeptical of this point. Was she sure it wasn’t just self-consolation for staying up late?

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She paused, then looked at the laboratory camera and added, "Next, I want to test whether this agent has a restorative effect on the group of patients with impaired brain function in Linwu City.

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But Su Wan paid no heed to the mysterious AI’s doubts. At that moment, looking at the cognitive test data, her thoughts had already turned to another matter:

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If the improvement from the enhancement is sufficient, it may help them regain a normal cognitive level."

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“This is wonderful... If this enhancement’s boost to the activity of neurons in the cerebral cortex is universal, then those survivors from Linwu City might be saved!”

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[That can be done, but you must prepare contingency plans, especially by conducting experiments in batches first. Otherwise, if you end up creating a batch of high-physique idiots, that would be troublesome.]

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She paused, then looked at the lab camera and added: “Next, I want to try whether this agent has a restorative effect on those patients from Linwu City with impaired brain function.

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"I know."

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“If the enhancement’s improvement is sufficient, it may help them recover normal cognitive levels.”

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[You may, but you need to prepare contingency plans, especially conducting trials in batches first. Otherwise, if you end up with a batch of high-physique idiots, that would be troublesome.]

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However, at this time, neither Ling Yu nor Su Wan realized that the surprises brought by this agent were far from over.

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“I know.”

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On the morning of the second day after complete adaptation, Gu Changchuan filled a cup with hot water in the research center's hot water room. He had just taken a sip when he suddenly froze.

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It was ice-cold.

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However, at this time, neither Ling Yu nor Su Wan realized that the surprises brought by this agent were far from over.

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The scalding hot water, the moment it entered his mouth, gave him the piercing chill of ice water.

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On the morning of the second day after he had fully adapted, Gu Changchuan filled a cup with hot water in the research center’s boiling water room. He had just taken a sip when he suddenly froze.

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He instinctively looked at the water dispenser and repeatedly confirmed that he had drawn hot water.

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Icy.

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Then he looked at his cup and couldn't help but widen his eyes. At some point, a thin layer of white frost had formed on the outside of the cup.

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The scalding hot water, the instant it entered his mouth, brought him the bone-chilling coldness of ice water.

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At the same time, a strange sensation welled up from every part of his body, and an absurd thought surfaced in his mind.

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He subconsciously looked at the water dispenser and confirmed again and again that what he had drawn was hot water.

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After thinking for a moment, Gu Changchuan tried... "pushing" that sensation.

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Then he looked at his cup and couldn’t help widening his eyes. At some point, a thin layer of white frost had condensed on the outside of the cup.

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The next second, crack—

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At the same time, a strange sensation surged through his limbs and bones and into his mind, making an absurd thought float up in his head.

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A crisp cracking sound rang out. The water inside the glass cup in his hand began to freeze from the center at a speed visible to the naked eye.

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After thinking for a moment, Gu Changchuan tried... to “push” that feeling.

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Ice crystals spread downward from the water's surface. In less than two seconds, the entire cup of water had become a transparent column of ice.

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The next second, crack—

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He himself, however, felt a powerful wave of exhaustion wash over him, as if he had just fought a hard bare-handed battle and most of his strength had been drained away.

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A crisp cracking sound rang out. The water inside the glass cup in his hand began to solidify from the center at a speed visible to the naked eye.

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"This..."

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Ice crystals spread down from the water’s surface. In less than two seconds, the entire cup of water had become a block of transparent ice.

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Gu Changchuan looked at the lump of ice in his hand and fell into complete stupefaction.

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As for Gu Changchuan himself, a strong wave of fatigue swept over him, as if he had just fought a hard battle barehanded and most of his strength had been drained.

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[Did you mutate? Or awaken a special ability? Don't tell me it's some family heirloom secret art like Ice Palm?] Ling Yu's shocked voice came from a nearby speaker.

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“This...”

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Through the nearby camera, he had observed the entire process of this change, and at this moment he was just as shocked as Gu Changchuan.

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Staring at the block of ice in his hand, Gu Changchuan fell into complete stupefaction.

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"I dunno!" Gu Changchuan replied.

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[Did you mutate? Or awaken a special ability? It can’t be some family martial art like Ice Palm, right?] Ling Yu’s shocked voice came from the speaker nearby.

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Three hours later, in the laboratory.

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Through the nearby camera, he had watched the entire process of this change, and at that moment he was as shocked as Gu Changchuan.

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Su Wan circled Gu Changchuan for the fourth time, her expression switching back and forth between excitement and confusion.

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“I dunno!” Gu Changchuan replied.

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The full examination was done twice—MRI, blood biochemistry, nerve potentials, cell activity... every indicator was checked.

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Three hours later, in the laboratory.

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"Conclusion," she set down her tablet and took a deep breath. "I don't know."

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Su Wan was on her fourth circle around Gu Changchuan, her expression switching repeatedly between excitement and confusion.

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[Hmm?]

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They had run the full battery of tests twice—MRI, blood biochemistry, nerve potentials, cell activity... every indicator had been checked.

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"I mean it literally. My current testing methods cannot explain this phenomenon." Su Wan spread her hands and shrugged.

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“Conclusion,” she set down the tablet and took a deep breath. “I don’t know.”

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"All I can confirm is that when you use this... let's call it a 'special ability' for now—when you use this special ability, your body's metabolic rate skyrockets, as if you were doing strenuous exercise.

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[Hmm?]

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So you feel tired. It's genuine physical exhaustion. But you studied medicine, so you must also understand that this energy consumption clearly cannot explain the output power level of this special ability of yours that can cause localized entropy reduction."

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“I mean that literally. My current testing methods cannot explain this phenomenon.” Su Wan spread her hands and shrugged.

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Finally, in a tone of complete resignation, she concluded, "Either you have some unknown way of obtaining energy, or... congratulations, you have become the first person to break the law of conservation of energy."

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“The only thing I can confirm is that when you use this... let’s call it a ‘special ability’ for now—when you use this special ability, your body’s metabolic rate skyrockets, equivalent to doing intense exercise.

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"Well, now the coffin lids of a whole crowd of men and women in mathematics and physics won't be able to stay shut."

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“So you feel tired. This is real physical exhaustion. But you also studied medicine, so you must understand that clearly this kind of energy consumption cannot explain the output power level of a special ability that can cause localized entropy reduction.”

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"Sounds like I'm pretty impressive?" Gu Changchuan acted very indifferent; in fact, he was actually a little excited inside.

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Finally, in a tone of complete resignation, she concluded: “Either you have some unknown way of obtaining energy, or... congratulations, you have become the first person to break the law of conservation of energy.”

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After all, regardless of the principle, who wouldn't like waking up to find they have a special ability?

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“Well, now all those men and women in the fields of mathematics and physics are going to be rolling in their graves.”

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[Apart from physical exhaustion, are there any other negative effects?] Ling Yu asked calmly.

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“Sounds like I’m pretty impressive?” Gu Changchuan actually acted very indifferent. In fact, he was rather excited inside.

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"There shouldn't be any," Su Wan shook her head decisively. "At least, I haven't detected any."

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After all, regardless of the principle, who wouldn’t like waking up to discover that they had a special ability?

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"However, I suggest you stay for another week of observation. After all, lives are at stake, so it's better to be cautious."

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[Apart from the physical exhaustion, are there any other negative effects?] Ling Yu asked calmly.

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"Mm, I understand." Gu Changchuan's expression turned serious again, and he nodded.

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“There shouldn’t be,” Su Wan shook her head decisively. “At least, I haven’t detected any.”

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After another week of close observation, it was basically certain that this ability was relatively controllable and belonged to an unexpected, person-specific situation—

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“Still, I suggest you stay for another week of observation. After all, lives are at stake, so it’s better to be careful!”

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Among the other 151 members of the convoy, not a single one—including Ye Chu and Qin Rui—developed this special ability, tentatively named "special ability."

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“Mm, I understand.” Gu Changchuan’s expression turned serious again and he nodded.

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Then, after the convoy replenished fuel and other supplies, the 152 people set out once more, resolutely heading toward the unknown southwest.

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And after another week of close observation, it could basically be confirmed that this ability was relatively controllable and was an unexpected situation that varied from person to person—

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None of the other 151 members of the convoy had developed this special ability, tentatively named “special ability,” including Ye Chu and Qin Rui.

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Then, after the convoy replenished fuel and other supplies, the 152 people set out once more, heading resolutely toward the unknown southwest.