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Three days after the "Travelers" convoy departed, the shelter's internal enhancement plan was fully rolled out as well.

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Three days after the "Travelers" convoy departed, the shelter's enhancement plan rolled out in full.

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The standard agent production line officially entered stable operation, and vial after vial of pale blue agent streamed off the line without pause.

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The standard agent production line officially entered stable operation, producing tube after tube of pale blue agent in a steady stream.

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And ranked by Honor Value, the injection list for the first batch of two hundred people was announced.

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And ranked by Honor Value, the injection list for the first batch of two hundred people was published.

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Ling Yu's initial plan was to schedule the injections in batches according to members' Honor Value, with the goal of enhancing everyone.

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Ling Yu's initial plan was to schedule injections in batches according to members' Honor Value, with the goal of full enhancement.

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Of course, for members who had joined the shelter for less than a month, or who had records of serious misconduct during their time at the shelter.

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Of course, for members who had joined the shelter for less than a month, or who had records of serious misconduct during their time at the shelter,

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In addition to Honor Value, there were additional Energy Point requirements.

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there were additional Energy Point requirements beyond Honor Value.

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The reason was simple: no matter how broad-minded Ling Yu was, he hadn't yet reached the point of being unconditionally generous toward people he wasn't familiar with or had doubts about.

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The reason was simple: no matter how open-minded Ling Yu was, he hadn't yet reached the point of being unconditionally generous to people he didn't know well or had doubts about.

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And as the injection plan proceeded in an orderly manner, another special case like Gu Changchuan appeared.

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And as the injection plan proceeded in an orderly manner, another special case like Gu Changchuan emerged.

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The head of the Core Operations Department—Zhang Wu.

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Zhang Wu, the head of the Core Operations Department.

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It happened on the third day after he completed his injection.

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It happened three days after he completed his injection.

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At the time, he was doing a strength test in the physical training room at the Personnel Training Center. He slammed a punch into the force-testing target, and the data came out 62 percent higher than before the injection—within the normal range.

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He had been doing strength tests in the physical training room of the Personnel Training Center, slamming a punch into the force-testing target. The reading was 62 percent higher than before the injection — within the normal range.

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But when he was about to do the second set of tests, he suddenly felt some kind of power swelling inside his body.

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But when he was about to begin the second set of tests, he suddenly felt some kind of power swelling inside his body.

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Then, he instinctively yielded to that feeling, and an unbelievable scene unfolded.

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Then, instinctively, he yielded to the feeling — and an incredible scene unfolded.

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Zhang Wu's height shot up from 1.82 meters to 2.5 meters within ten seconds, then continued to climb, finally stopping at 3.03 meters.

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Zhang Wu's height shot up from 1.82 meters to 2.5 meters within ten seconds, then kept growing until it finally stopped at 3.03 meters.

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His entire build scaled up proportionally along with it. Because he knew about Gu Changchuan's case, he wasn't too panicked at the time. Instead, he immediately continued the test following Ling Yu's instruction.

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His entire build scaled up proportionally along with it. Because he knew about Gu Changchuan's case, he hadn't been too panicked at the time, and had instead immediately continued the tests as Ling Yu instructed.

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The new data showed that after growing larger, Zhang Wu's strength figure improved even more dramatically—nearly 80 percent higher than the post-physique-enhancement value.

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The new data showed that after growing larger, Zhang Wu's strength reading had risen even more dramatically — nearly 80 percent above the figure after physique enhancement.

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[That's a pretty nice improvement!] At the training center, Ling Yu's voice came from the Sentinel. [How do you feel?]

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[That's a pretty nice boost!] At the training center, Ling Yu's voice came from the Sentinel. [How do you feel?]

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"Huff..." Zhang Wu exhaled a turbid breath, quietly feeling the surging, overwhelming power inside his body, along with the doubled fatigue that came with it.

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"Phew..." Zhang Wu exhaled a mouthful of stale air, calmly feeling the surging power churning within him, along with the doubled fatigue that came with it.

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"It's alright. I just feel like I get tired easily, as if I were running while carrying a load."

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"It's okay, just that I tire easily — like running with weights on."

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His giant form ultimately held for less than five minutes before he felt his stamina give out. His body rapidly shrank and returned to his original height.

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His giant form ultimately lasted less than five minutes before he felt his stamina give out. His body rapidly shrank, returning to its original height.

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"His neural structure must have changed during the giant transformation," Su Wan, who had received the footage in the laboratory, guessed with certainty in her tone.

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"His neural structure must have changed during the giant transformation," Su Wan, who had received the footage, guessed with certainty in the laboratory.

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"Otherwise, with that kind of build, it would be unlikely for him to maintain his original reaction speed. He should be more cumbersome.

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"Otherwise, at that size, he couldn't have maintained his original reaction speed — he should have been clumsier.

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I'll need more research data for the exact mechanism, but this is undoubtedly another direction of 'special ability.'"

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I'd need more research data to understand the exact principle, but this is undoubtedly another direction of 'special ability.'"

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However, this ability that had awakened unexpectedly left Zhang Wu a little unsure whether to laugh or cry.

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However, this unexpectedly awakened ability left Zhang Wu uncertain whether to laugh or cry.

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"I feel like this ability is way too useless!" In the evening, Zhang Wu sat in his office and said wryly to the camera. "Although it's true that after growing bigger, I do get stronger and can take more hits.

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"I feel like this ability is way too useless!" That evening, Zhang Wu sat in his office, smiling wryly at the camera. "Sure, getting bigger makes me stronger and lets me take more hits.

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But on the battlefield, this means almost nothing. Against those advanced mutants, this little bit of defense still isn't enough.

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But on the battlefield, it's almost meaningless. Against those advanced mutants, this much defense still isn't enough.

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If it really comes to a fight, it's more practical to skip the transformation and honestly wear the 'Dawn' armor."

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If it really comes to a fight, I'd be better off not transforming and just wearing the 'Dawn' armor."

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He wasn't wrong. If he charged into battle bare-chested, he'd simply be a three-meter-tall live target. He'd only die faster on the battlefield.

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He was right. If he went into battle bare-armed, he'd be nothing but a three-meter-tall living target — he'd only die faster on the battlefield.

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But the "Dawn" exoskeleton power armor couldn't possibly grow along with his body. This ability of his could almost be considered completely useless in practice.

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But the "Dawn" exoskeleton power armor couldn't possibly grow with his body, making this ability of his almost completely useless in practice.

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Not like Gu Changchuan—although his output was limited, at least he could chill some fruit, drinks, or whatever for himself.

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Unlike Gu Changchuan, who — though his output was limited — could at least chill some fruit and drinks for himself.

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[That may not necessarily be the case,] Ling Yu's electronic voice sounded at just the right moment. He had a different view of Zhang Wu's frustration.

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[Not necessarily,] Ling Yu's electronic voice sounded at just the right moment. He had a different view on Zhang Wu's helplessness.

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[I happened to discover a new piece of equipment recently. When I first found it, I kept thinking it was a bit useless. But now it looks like it was tailor-made for you.]

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[I happened to come across a new piece of equipment recently. When I first found it, I kept feeling it was a bit useless. But looking at it now, it's practically tailor-made for you.]

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Ling Yu's consciousness sank into the system, fixing his gaze on a blueprint that had been left to gather dust in a corner ever since he killed the Soaring Serpent.

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Ling Yu's consciousness sank into the system, fixing his gaze on a blueprint that had been left to gather dust in a corner ever since he slew the Soaring Serpent.

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['Dragon Bone' Bio-Graft Armor Tactical Framework Blueprint.]

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["Dragon Bone" Bio-Graft Armor Tactical Framework Blueprint].

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This thing was ridiculously expensive—materializing it required a full 5,000 civilization points, five times as expensive as "Dawn."

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This thing was absurdly expensive — materializing it cost a full 5,000 civilization points, five times more than "Dawn."

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But its strength was highly dependent on the wearer's own base stats. Although it possessed growth potential, able to provide stronger amplification as the wearer's physique increased...

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But its strength was highly dependent on the wearer's own base stats. It did possess a growth property, able to provide greater amplification as the wearer's physique increased.

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But the problem was, Ling Yu wasn't a flesh-and-blood life form!

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The problem was, Ling Yu wasn't a flesh-and-blood life form!

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He couldn't use it at all, and the shelter's survivors were just a bunch of little skinny monkeys—their physical ceiling was right there.

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He had no use for it at all, and the shelter's survivors were just a bunch of skinny little monkeys — their physique ceiling was plainly right there.

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Even if becoming a Level 1 enhancer strengthened their physiques. Even if this Bio-Graft Armor could further amplify and enhance their bodies, providing protection such as bio-armor.

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Even if they became Level 1 enhancers with strengthened physiques, even if this Bio-Graft Armor could further amplify the enhanced physique and provide protections like bio-armor,

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Its actual enhancement effect was still very limited. It wasn't as good as wearing a set of "Dawn" exoskeleton power armor.

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its actual enhancement effect would still be very limited — not as good as wearing a set of "Dawn" exoskeleton power armor.

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After all, according to the equipment description, this thing was actually better suited to life forms with already outrageous base stats and special advantages in body size—completely incompatible with humanity's current situation.

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After all, according to the equipment description, this thing was better suited to life forms with outrageously powerful base stats and special advantages in body shape — completely mismatched with humanity's current situation.

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But now, the emergence of Zhang Wu's special ability had caused the value of this equipment to undergo a tremendous change.

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But now, the appearance of Zhang Wu's special ability had dramatically changed this equipment's value.

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It could change along with the wearer's body size, and it possessed highly adaptive bio-armor and living armament. It was simply his Exclusive Weapon!

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It could change with the wearer's body size, and it possessed highly adaptive bio-armor and living armament — it was practically his exclusive weapon!

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[Ding! Consumed 5,000 civilization points. Materialized 'Dragon Bone' Bio-Graft Armor Tactical Framework x1.]

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[Ding! Consumed 5,000 civilization points. Materialized "Dragon Bone" Bio-Graft Armor Tactical Framework x1.]

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Zhang Wu looked at the description on the blueprint, his brow gradually furrowing, then gradually smoothing out.

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Zhang Wu looked at the description on the blueprint, his brows gradually knitting together, then gradually smoothing out.

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This was equipment completely different from ordinary mechanical armor. It wasn't a shell worn outside the body, but a biomass frame structure that would form a semi-fused state with the user's body.

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This was equipment completely different from ordinary mechanical armor. It wasn't a shell worn outside the body, but a biomass framework structure that would form a semi-fused state with the user's body.

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"You mean, it can grow along with me?" Zhang Wu confirmed.

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"You mean, it can grow bigger along with me?" Zhang Wu confirmed.

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And based on my estimates, in your giant transformation state, the additional load-bearing capacity it provides will greatly extend your maintenance time.

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And based on my estimates, in your giant state, the extra load-bearing capacity it provides will greatly extend your maintenance time.

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According to my calculations, once you wear the Dragon Bone symbiotic armor, the strength output of your three-meter form...]

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Based on my calculations, once you're wearing the Dragon Bone Bio-Graft Armor, the power output of your three-meter form...]

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Zhang Wu looked at that number, fell silent for two seconds, and then calmly stood up.

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Zhang Wu stared at that number, was silent for two seconds, then calmly stood up.

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After casually tossing aside the fragment he'd broken off the office desk, the head of the Operations Department, who had always been good at keeping his composure, spoke with great steadiness:

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After casually tossing aside the chunk of desk he'd torn off, the Operations Department head, who was always so good at keeping his composure, said very steadily:

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Three minutes later, in a new room in the underground base, Zhang Wu saw the finished product of this Tactical Framework.

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Three minutes later, in a new room of the underground base, Zhang Wu saw the finished product of this tactical framework.

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When the metal pod in the center of the room came into his sight, his eyes went wide.

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When the metal pod in the center of the room came into view, his eyes went wide.

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It wasn't so much equipment as it was a "Dragon Bone" brimming with artistry.

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It wasn't so much equipment as it was an artistic "dragon bone."

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It floated quietly in the nutrient solution. The main body was a slender skeleton formed from dark golden, metal-like matter, shaped much like a spinal column, its surface covered in complex crimson patterns.

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It floated silently in nutrient fluid. Its main body was a slender skeleton of dark-gold, metal-like substance, shaped much like a spinal column, its surface covered in intricate crimson patterns.

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At the joints of the skeleton were countless intricate blood-red sinews, slowly pulsing as if alive. The entire suit of armor exuded a dangerous aura like a dormant predator.

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At the joints of the skeleton were countless complex blood-red sinews, pulsing slowly like living things. The entire suit radiated a dangerous aura like a dormant predator.

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"This, this..." Zhang Wu stared wide-eyed, holding it in for a long while before finally squeezing out, "Badass!"

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"Th-this..." Zhang Wu stared wide-eyed, straining for a long moment before finally forcing out, "Badass!"

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Zhang Wu took a deep breath, walked step by step toward the cultivation pod, and reached out his hand.

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Zhang Wu took a deep breath and walked step by step toward the cultivation pod, reaching out his hand.

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When the dark golden spine-shaped device attached itself to his back, a warm sensation immediately spread along his spine. There was no cold metallic touch—instead, there was a warm, moist feeling of fusing with flesh and blood.

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When the dark-gold spine-shaped device attached to his back, a warm sensation spread along his spine at once. There was no cold metal touch — instead, it was a warm, moist feeling of fusing with flesh and blood.

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The "Dragon Bone" silently unfolded, like a living suit of armor growing on its own to cover all his vital areas.

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The "Dragon Bone" silently unfolded, growing on its own like a suit of living armor to cover every vital point on his body.

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The dark golden scale armor refracted a subdued metallic luster under the light. The bone plates at his shoulder blades, forearms, and shins were thicker, while the joints retained full mobility.

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The dark-gold scale armor reflected a subdued metallic luster in the light. The bone plates at his shoulder blades, forearms, and shins were thicker, while the joints retained full mobility.

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Zhang Wu moved his arm, and the bone armor silently opened and closed with his motion, with no hint of stiffness.

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Zhang Wu moved his arm, and the bone armor opened and closed silently with the motion — not a hint of sluggishness.

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[Try it.] Ling Yu's voice sounded.

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[Try it.] Ling Yu's voice rang out.

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Zhang Wu nodded and activated his ability once again.

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Zhang Wu nodded and activated his ability once more.

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As his height shot up, the bone armor expanded along with him, and the gaps between the scales were quickly filled by newly grown carapace.

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As his height shot up, the bone armor expanded with him, the gaps between scales quickly filled by newly grown shell.

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The three-meter-tall figure remained covered in complete dark golden bio-armor. At this moment, Zhang Wu looked like a war god, overwhelmingly imposing.

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His three-meter-tall frame remained covered in complete dark-gold bio-armor throughout — at this moment, Zhang Wu looked like a war god, overwhelmingly imposing.

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At the same time, he could also feel that while wearing the Dragon Bone symbiotic armor, the fatigue brought on by the giant transformation was greatly alleviated, and the time he could maintain the form extended from under five minutes to one hour and forty-seven minutes.

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At the same time, he could feel that with the Dragon Bone Bio-Graft Armor on, the fatigue from the giant transformation was greatly alleviated. The time he could maintain his giant form extended from under five minutes to one hour and forty-seven minutes.

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Zhang Wu clenched his fist, and the air was squeezed into a burst, producing a muffled thump. He felt like he could punch through an entire building with one blow now!

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Zhang Wu clenched his fist, compressing the air with a muffled thump. He felt like he could punch straight through a building right now!

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"Holy crap! Holy crap! Holy crap!"

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"Holy shit! Holy shit! Holy shit!"

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This normally composed head of the Operations Department was now so excited he was like a child who had gotten a new toy, his vocabulary plummeting sharply.

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This perpetually composed head of the Operations Department was now as excited as a child who'd just gotten a new toy, his vocabulary plummeting sharply.

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All he could do was pace excitedly back and forth inside the underground base, just like a Lin Yue who had just been let out of a cage.

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All he knew was pacing excitedly back and forth inside the underground base, just like a Lin Yue who'd just been let out of a cage.

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Seeing this, Ling Yu felt happy as well. After all, with the crisis imminent, every bit of enhancement was worth rejoicing over.

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Seeing this, Ling Yu felt happy as well. After all, with a crisis imminent, every bit of enhancement was worth celebrating.

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Late at night, at the shelter, in the logistics management office.

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Late at night, in the shelter's logistics management office.

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"Brother Wu, what's going on today? Why are you still at the training center so late?" Shen Yan asked the air with some puzzlement. Just a moment ago, while pouring herself a glass of water, she had actually run into Zhang Wu in the corridor in the dead of night.

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"Brother Wu, what's going on? Out this late and still at the training center?" Shen Yan asked the air, a little puzzled. Just now, while pouring herself a glass of water, she'd actually run into Zhang Wu in the corridor in the dead of night.

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This was hardly a common occurrence. With Zhang Wu's level of self-discipline, when there was nothing going on, he would definitely be asleep by a little past nine and up at six-thirty without fail—a routine so regular it was almost military discipline.

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This was hardly a common occurrence. Given Zhang Wu's level of self-discipline, when there was nothing going on, he was sure to be asleep by a little past nine and up at 6:30 without fail — a routine so regular it bordered on discipline.

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[It's nothing! He's testing his 'Exclusive Weapon'! I figure tonight, he won't be falling asleep so easily.] Ling Yu's voice came from the speaker, tinged with amusement.

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[It's nothing! He's testing his 'exclusive weapon'! I figure he won't be falling asleep easily tonight.] Ling Yu's voice came from the speaker, carrying amusement.

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"Is that so? That's good, then." Shen Yan smiled as well. Although she didn't quite understand what kind of Exclusive Weapon it was, it was clearly not a bad thing, and that was enough.

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"Is that so? That's nice, then." Shen Yan smiled as well. Though she didn't quite understand what kind of exclusive weapon it was, it clearly wasn't a bad thing — and that was enough.

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Then, she looked at the screen in front of her once more. On it was the real-time surveillance feed of Letian District.

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Then she looked at the screen in front of her again. On it was the real-time surveillance feed of Letian District.

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The good news was that it was still the same as ever—red flesh covered all the buildings, and grotesquely shaped mutants roamed ceaselessly among them.

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The good news was that it still looked the same as ever — red flesh covering all the buildings, grotesque mutants roaming ceaselessly among them.

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But no one could guarantee when disaster would break out.

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But no one could guarantee when disaster would erupt.

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"Zhuangsheng," she stared at the feed, her voice lowering a little, and asked with pointed meaning, "if that thing really starts moving... in the worst-case scenario, can we hold on?"

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"Zhuangsheng," she stared at the feed, her voice softening, and asked with pointed meaning, "If that thing really starts to move... in the worst-case scenario, can we hold out?"

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[Honestly, I'm not sure,] Ling Yu's consciousness withdrew from the state of enjoying Zhang Wu's silly glee, understanding that she was asking whether he had any last-resort fallback measures.

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[Honestly, I'm not sure,] Ling Yu's consciousness pulled away from savoring Zhang Wu's goofy delight, understanding that she was asking whether he had any ultimate fallback measures.

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To this, Ling Yu expressed that he really wished he had such a measure, but unfortunately, he didn't.

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To that, Ling Yu would say that he really wished he had such a measure — but unfortunately, he didn't.

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So, he simply spoke the truth: [For an existence over two hundred meters in size that may possess unknown abilities, I currently have no verified means to guarantee its destruction.]

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So he simply spoke the truth: [An entity over two hundred meters in size that may possess unknown abilities — I currently have no verified means to guarantee its destruction.]

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Shen Yan fell silent for a while.

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Shen Yan was silent for a while.

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"If... if it really comes to the worst-case scenario?"

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"What if... what if it really comes to the worst?"

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[Then we run,] Ling Yu answered crisply. [The underground tunnel network already covers three directions. Both Baishan and Changzhou have preset evacuation points.]

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[Then run,] Ling Yu answered, crisp and clean. [The underground tunnel network already covers three directions, and both Baishan and Changzhou have preset evacuation points.]

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[As long as the people are alive, there is still hope for everything.]

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[As long as the people survive, there's still hope for everything.]

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"What about you?" Shen Yan frowned. She knew very well how crucial this AI in front of her was to the survivors. If they lost him, the difficulty of this war would rise exponentially.

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"What about you?" Shen Yan frowned. She knew very well how critical this AI before her was to the survivors. If they lost him, the difficulty of this war would rise exponentially.

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[What else can I do? When the time comes, I'll just set off a big firework show!] Ling Yu replied with feigned ease. [I'm an AI. I can just hop onto any computer, can't I?]

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[What else can I do? When the time comes, I'll just blow up a big firework!] Ling Yu answered with feigned nonchalance. [I'm an AI. I can just hop onto any computer, problem solved.]

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"Is that really so?" Shen Yan, however, wasn't persuaded by this brush-off. Her gaze was fixed tightly on the camera in the meeting room. "The power station, for you, is actually—"

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"Is that really so?" Shen Yan wasn't convinced by this joking deflection. Her gaze locked tightly onto the meeting room camera. "The power station, for you, is actually—"

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"Report! Baishan City has been completely cleansed. The Hive's circuits have been fully laid. The transport route is expected to be connected by tomorrow!"

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"Report! Baishan City has been fully purged. The Hive circuits are laid. The transport route is expected to connect through by tomorrow!"

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Immediately after came Lin Yue's voice: "The uranium enrichment plant in Changzhou City can resume operations now. Also, we found some inventory reserves over here that hadn't been shipped out. The fuel supply is guaranteed!"

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Right after came Lin Yue's voice: "The uranium enrichment plant in Changzhou City can resume operation now, and we also found some stockpiled reserves here that were never shipped out — the fuel supply is guaranteed!"

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At these words, Shen Yan's eyes lit up. This progress was even faster than she had expected. With that being the case, she immediately looked up at the camera once more and spoke rapidly:

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Hearing this, Shen Yan's eyes lit up. This progress was even faster than she had expected. And with that, she immediately looked up at the camera again and said rapidly:

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"Then we can start the power station's major overhaul plan tomorrow, right?"

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"Then we can start the power station overhaul plan tomorrow, right?"

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"That way we can further unlock your 'potential.'" She sat down abruptly, once again fully concentrating on the computer. "Let me double-check the plan arrangements."

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"That way, we can further release your 'potential.'" She sat down abruptly, focusing completely on the computer again. "Let me reconfirm the plan arrangement."

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Watching this old friend—too perceptive and too prone to falling into anxiety—bustle about, Ling Yu's tone softened a little. [At least for now, we still have time.]

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Watching this old friend — overly perceptive and all too prone to anxiety — bustling about, Ling Yu's tone softened a little. [At least for now, we still have time.]

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Ling Yu's attention shifted to the drone high above Letian District. Gazing down at the city of flesh below, which had gone quiet at some unknown point, he murmured silently to himself:

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Ling Yu's attention shifted to the drone high above Letian District. Gazing down at that flesh city below, which had fallen silent at some unknown point, he said to himself silently:

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[Although I don't have complete certainty, it's not as if I have no powerful tricks at all.]

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[Although I don't have complete certainty, it's not as if I don't have any killer moves at all.]