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This place—which had cost Ling Yu a Sky Blade the very first time he encountered it—had long been like forbidden ground.

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This place — where Ling Yu had lost a Sky Blade on the very first encounter — had long been treated like forbidden ground.

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Even now, Ling Yu still hadn't figured out what kind of attack method it had used against the Sky Blade back then.

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Even now, Ling Yu still hadn't figured out what kind of attack it had used against the Sky Blade back then.

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But that didn't matter, because today, he had no shortage of drones and shells.

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But that didn't matter, because today, he had plenty of drones and artillery shells.

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Along with the first volley of artillery fire, three thousand "Soldier Bee" suicide drones formed the first wave, charging into the dense mist in a tight wedge formation.

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With the first salvo of the artillery, three thousand "Soldier Bee" suicide drones formed the first wave, plunging into the dense mist in a tight wedge formation.

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Ling Yu didn't try to have them gather intelligence or analyze the situation inside the building.

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Ling Yu hadn't tried to have them gather intelligence or analyze the situation inside the building.

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Three thousand points of light rose within the dense mist at almost the same moment. Blazing white light pierced through the fog in an instant, illuminating the entire area as bright as day.

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Three thousand points of light rose from within the mist at almost the same instant. The blazing white radiance pierced the mist in that very moment, illuminating the entire area as bright as day.

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Right behind came a thunderous roar that nearly tore eardrums. Violent shock waves swept outward in all directions like a tsunami, sending shrubs, streetlights, and abandoned vehicles flying like scraps of paper. The surrounding abandoned buildings were leveled in an instant.

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Hot on its heels came a roar that nearly tore the eardrums. A violent shock wave swept in all directions like a tsunami, flinging shrubs, streetlights, and abandoned vehicles aside like scraps of paper. The abandoned buildings all around were leveled to the ground in an instant.

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Even the convoy on the high ground at a safe distance felt the blast of the explosion's air current. At that moment, even Lin Yue and the others, who were seeing this kind of explosion for the first time, were stunned.

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Even the convoy on the high ground, positioned beyond the safe distance, felt the blast of the explosion. In that moment, even Lin Yue and the others, who were seeing this kind of explosion for the first time, were stunned.

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However, when the aftermath of the first round of explosions dispersed, the scene revealed made everyone on the high ground suck in another sharp breath.

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However, when the aftershocks of the first round of explosions faded, the scene that emerged made everyone on the high ground suck in a cold breath once again.

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The building's outer concrete shell fell away like rain, revealing its true interior—a living structure seemingly built from fresh flesh and blood.

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Concrete fragments from the building's outer layer rained down, revealing what was truly inside — a living structure built from fresh, vivid flesh and blood.

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At the very center of the building's interior was only a thing like a colossal egg sac formed from crimson flesh.

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In the very center of the building's interior, there was only a thing like an enormous egg sac made of bright red flesh.

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Dark-red sinews coiled across its surface like thick blood vessels, pulsing slowly.

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Dark red sinews, like thick blood vessels, coiled across its surface, pulsing slowly.

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Within the translucent sac-like structure, a giant flesh embryo over ten meters in diameter was clearly visible.

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Inside the translucent sac, a giant fleshy embryo more than ten meters in diameter was clearly visible.

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And the saturation bombardment just now—enough to destroy an armored battalion—had been forcibly blocked by a layer of madly writhing dark-red "flesh blanket" several meters thick.

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And the saturation bombardment that could have destroyed an armored battalion just moments ago had been forcibly stopped by a layer of madly writhing dark red "flesh blanket" several meters thick.

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At that moment, the blanket's surface was largely charred and riddled with holes, but the tissue beneath it was still writhing and proliferating at a visible rate.

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At this moment, the flesh blanket's surface was charred over large areas, riddled with holes — yet the tissue beneath it was still writhing and proliferating at a visible rate.

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"I knew it wouldn't be that simple!" Lin Yue cursed.

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"I knew it couldn't be that simple!" Lin Yue cursed.

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[Its repair must consume energy,] Ling Yu's voice sounded through the comm channel. [Keep attacking—don't give it a chance to catch its breath!]

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[Its repair must be consuming energy,] Ling Yu's voice rang out over the comm channel. [Keep attacking. Don't give it a chance to catch its breath!]

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But at the same time, hundreds upon thousands of blood-colored tentacles as thin as hair shot out from the blanket's surface at a speed so fast that even Ling Yu could barely track them. Each one easily pierced through several drones.

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But at the same moment, hundreds upon thousands of hair-thin blood-red tentacles shot out from the surface of the flesh blanket — so fast that even Ling Yu could barely track them, and each one easily pierced through several drones.

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Now, Ling Yu finally understood how that Sky Blade had been shot down back then.

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Now Ling Yu finally understood how that Sky Blade had crashed back then.

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The delayed detonation modules preset on the downed drones were still counting down.

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The delayed-detonation modules preset in the downed drones were still counting down.

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"Second round of fire! Aim at that embryo!" Lin Yue gave the order decisively. Any fool could see how serious the problem would be if they let that thing be born.

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"Second volley! Aim for that embryo!" Lin Yue ordered decisively. Even a fool could see how serious the problem would be if they let this thing be born.

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On the high ground, the self-propelled gun-howitzers and rocket launchers fired another volley.

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On the high ground, the self-propelled gun-howitzer and the rocket launchers fired in unison once more.

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The shells traced parabolas down onto the egg sac, but that flesh blanket nimbly blocked every attack, like a blood-colored barrier.

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The shells traced parabolas and slammed into the egg sac, but that flesh blanket was agile enough to block all the attacks, like a blood-colored barrier.

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Explosions plowed scorched furrows across the blanket's surface, yet they still couldn't harm the embryo behind it.

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The explosions plowed charred furrows across the flesh blanket's surface, yet never managed to harm the embryo behind it.

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But just then, at the foot of the high ground, countless zombies and mutants changed direction and began charging the high ground like mad.

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But just then, at the foot of the high ground, countless zombies and mutants abruptly changed direction and began charging up it like mad.

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Three or four humanoid monsters covered in black bone spikes were mixed in among them. Their objective was clear: destroy this fire position.

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Three or four humanoid monsters covered in black bone spikes mixed in among them. Their objective was clear: destroy this fire position.

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"Defense team! Open fire!" Chen Mo ordered calmly.

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"Defense squad! Open fire!" Chen Mo ordered calmly.

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On the flank of the position, dozens of 30 mm autocannons roared at the same time, and crimson streams of fire instantly suppressed every monster charging uphill.

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On the flank of the position, dozens of 30 mm autocannons roared at the same time, their crimson streams of fire instantly suppressing every monster charging uphill.

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An ancient noble tried to break through from the flank, and the rotary-barrel machine gun Chen Mo was holding sent it straight back into the corpse tide with a single burst.

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An ancient noble tried to break through from the flank, only to be blasted straight back into the corpse tide by a burst from the rotary machine gun Chen Mo was holding.

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If three thousand wasn't enough, then just crank up the quantity!

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Since three thousand wasn't enough, then just increase the dosage!

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The next second, Ling Yu directly sent ten thousand standby suicide drones charging toward the embryo.

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The next second, Ling Yu directly took control of ten thousand suicide drones on standby and sent them charging at the embryo.

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[Lin Yue, Chen Mo, order all ground units to fall back five hundred meters and prepare for the shock wave.]

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[Lin Yue, Chen Mo — order all ground units to fall back five hundred meters and prepare for the shock wave.]

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Ever since that explosion in Huining District, he'd understood.

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Ever since that blast in Huining District, he had come to understand something.

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Suicide drones are the true god!

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Suicide drones were the one true god!

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When dealing with these inexplicable things, don't slowly grind them down—you can never out-grind them.

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When dealing with these inexplicable things, there was no point in slowly grinding them down — that was a fight he could never afford.

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Give up thinking. Just blow them up.

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Stop thinking and just blow them up. That was all there was to it.

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There's nothing an explosion can't solve. If it doesn't die from the blast, then the yield wasn't enough.

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There was nothing an explosion couldn't solve. If it didn't die, the yield wasn't big enough.

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Increase the dosage—that's the answer!

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Increase the dosage, and done!

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A few seconds later, ten thousand points of light lit up around the twisted flesh embryo.

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A few seconds later, ten thousand points of light bloomed around the twisted flesh embryo.

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At that moment, time itself seemed to slow down.

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In that moment, time itself seemed to slow down.

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Then—BOOM!

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Then — BOOM!

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A white orb like a sun bloomed open above the ruins of the Hairui Biotechnology Building.

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A white sphere of light like a sun burst open above the ruins of the Hairui Biotechnology Building.

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Although the assault on Hairui Biological hadn't gone as smoothly as Ling Yu had expected, there was no doubt that this move had caught the enemy off guard, even throwing off the rhythm of their attack.

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Although the assault on Hairui Biological hadn't gone as smoothly as Ling Yu had hoped, there was no doubt that this tactic had caught the enemy off guard and thrown off the rhythm of their attack.

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For example, when fighting broke out at Hairui Biological, the Blood Wing monster in the sky—which had been locked in a tangled battle with the Sky Blade formation—abruptly froze.

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For example, when the fighting broke out at Hairui Biological, the "Blood Wing" monster in the sky — the one that had been locked in an endless dogfight with the Sky Blade formation — suddenly froze mid-motion.

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Then it let out a piercing shriek.

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Then it let out a shrill, piercing shriek.

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Countless blood-red sinews on its massive body blazed fiercely as it turned around recklessly, trying to fly toward Hairui Biological.

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Countless blood-red sinews across its massive body blazed brilliantly as it abandoned everything and wheeled around, trying to fly toward Hairui Biological.

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But how could Ling Yu, who had long been prepared, let it have its way?

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But how could Ling Yu, who had been prepared all along, ever let that happen?

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At the very moment that the Blood Wing monster abruptly changed direction and beat its wings—

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At that very instant — the moment this "Blood Wing" monster abruptly wheeled around and beat its wings.

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A Sky Blade that had been hovering at the edge of the battlefield overloaded its engine, turned into a streak of silver light, and slammed suicidally into the massive scaled wing that Blood Wing had just spread.

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A Sky Blade that had been hovering at the edge of the battlefield all along overloaded its engines, turned into a streak of silver light, and slammed suicidally into the Blood Wing's enormous scale-wings, which had just begun to spread open.

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CRASH!

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BANG!

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The violent explosion forcibly interrupted its acceleration, slamming its colossal body downward.

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The violent explosion forcibly interrupted its acceleration, smashing its colossal body hard downward.

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And in that instant of hesitation, the indicator lights on the more than two thousand Soldier Bee suicide drones that had already been lurking in the airspace around it simultaneously switched from blue to red.

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In that instant of stall, the indicator lights on the more than two thousand "Soldier Bee" suicide drones that had long since taken up positions in the airspace around it switched from blue to red all at once.

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A blazing white fireball exploded in midair.

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A blazing white fireball burst open in midair.

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When the light faded, a burning mass of black-red wreckage was falling.

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When the light faded, a burning mass of black-red wreckage was plummeting to the ground.

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Blood Wing's pair of gorgeous yet ferocious scaled wings had been blasted down to nothing but residual wing roots.

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The Blood Wing's pair of magnificent, savage scale-wings had been blasted down to nothing but the roots of the wings.

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Its charred carapace was covered in spiderweb-like cracks, from which bright-red tissue fluid gushed continuously like a fountain.

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Its charred black carapace was covered in spiderweb-like cracks, from which vivid red tissue fluid gushed endlessly like a fountain.

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Yet even so, it was still alive, every bit of flesh on its body desperately writhing in an attempt to regenerate.

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Yet even so, it was still alive, the flesh all over its body desperately writhing to regenerate.

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But without the ability to fly, it was nothing more than a sitting duck.

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But with no ability to fly, it was nothing more than a sitting duck.

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In the sky, the remaining dozen or so Sky Blades and more than two thousand swarm drones poured all their firepower down without hesitation.

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In the sky, the remaining dozen or so Sky Blades and more than two thousand swarm drones unhesitatingly poured out all their firepower.

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High-energy lasers, micro-missiles... an almost endless barrage drowned it completely.

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High-energy lasers, micro-missiles... the nearly endless attacks drowned it completely.

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At that moment, Ling Yu concentrated all of his aerial firepower on it, solely to eliminate it as quickly as possible.

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In that moment, Ling Yu concentrated every bit of his aerial firepower on it, all for the sake of destroying it as quickly as possible.

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Seeing that its regeneration speed was gradually failing to keep pace with the rate of destruction, Blood Wing's massive body twisted violently in midair and, enduring the hail of gunfire, charged at the shelter's black bulwark!

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Seeing its recovery speed gradually failing to keep up with the speed of its destruction, the Blood Wing's colossal body twisted violently in midair and — braving the hail of fire from all directions — charged at the shelter's black bulwark!

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The next second, hundreds of blood-red energy blades came down like a violent storm, blanketing the wall and turret directly ahead of it.

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The next second, hundreds of blood-red energy blades swept down like a violent storm onto the wall and the turrets directly in front of it.

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The swarm drones intercepted desperately, but its attacks were too dense—dozens of energy blades still broke through the interception net and slashed viciously into the black bulwark.

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The swarm drones intercepted with everything they had, but its attacks were too dense. Several dozen light blades still broke through the interception net and slashed hard into the black bulwark.

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The composite wall, which could withstand artillery bombardment, developed huge cracks for the first time.

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The composite wall, more than capable of withstanding artillery bombardment, showed enormous cracks for the first time.

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At the same time, Blood Wing had already charged to the foot of the wall, its raised forelimb pointing straight at the plasma turret atop it.

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Meanwhile, the Blood Wing had already reached the foot of the wall, its raised forelimb pointing straight at the plasma turret on the wall's top.

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[Shen Yan! Fall back!] Ling Yu's warning voice exploded through the comm channel.

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[Shen Yan! Fall back!] Ling Yu's warning exploded over the comm channel.

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"No way I'm running!" Shen Yan's eyes were locked on the targeting interface, her hands still rotating the turret with rock-steady control.

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"Too late to run!" Shen Yan's eyes were locked on the targeting interface, both hands still rotating the turret as steadily as a rock.

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The blue-black launch rails aligned on the head roaring up at the sky.

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The blue-black launch rail lined up on that head howling skyward.

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The electromagnetic acceleration rings lit up one by one.

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The electromagnetic acceleration rings lit up in succession.

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The next second—VWOOM——

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The next second — FWOOM——

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A blue-white orb of destruction struck dead center on the monster's chest, which was already riddled with holes.

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A blue-white orb of destruction struck dead center on the monster's chest, which was already riddled with wounds.

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The terrifying energy impact blasted the monster's upper body completely apart.

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The terrifying energy impact completely blasted the monster's upper body apart.

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Immediately after, several high-energy lasers fired from high above precisely vaporized its still-regenerating lower body, completely ending its life.

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Immediately after, several high-energy lasers lancing down from high altitude precisely vaporized the lower body that was still regenerating, finally ending its life.

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At the same time, Ling Yu's system window popped up a notification.

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At the same moment, Ling Yu's system window popped up with a notification.

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[Ding! Detected: host killed third-stage special mutant 'Type 03 Chitin-Armor Chimeric Weapon' x1. Civilization points gained: 8,000.]

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[Ding! Detected host kill: third-stage special mutant "Type-03 Insect-Armor Chimeric Weapon" x1. Civilization points gained: 8,000.]

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[Ding! Special drop blueprint obtained: "Lightning-Chasing Shadow" special-class large military UAV blueprint x1.]

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[Ding! Obtained special drop blueprint: "Lightning-Chasing Shadow" special-class large military UAV blueprint x1.]

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"I'm fine—can't die that easily, just a bit choked!" Shen Yan slumped into the operator's seat, casually wiped the blood from her temple, and grinned.

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"I'm fine, won't die — just a bit choked!" Shen Yan slumped back in the operator's chair, casually wiped the blood from her temple, and grinned.

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Kill her with that? They'd better go practice some more!

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Kill her with that? They'd need a lot more practice!

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The next second, she swung the barrel around again, aiming at other aerial mutant units closing in.

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The next second, she swung the cannon around again, aiming at the other airborne mutant units closing in.

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Meanwhile, on the ground battlefield, the Abyssal Centipede, which had been focus-fired by all heavy firepower within a short time, was finally blown completely to pieces under the unending barrage, with no possibility of recovery.

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Meanwhile, on the ground battlefield, the "Abyssal Centipede" — focus-fired by every heavy weapon in an extremely short time — was finally blasted into fragments by the unrelenting artillery fire, leaving no possibility of recovery.

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The corpse tide, which had been advancing relentlessly—breaking through three defensive lines and pressing close to the base of the city wall—began to be suppressed, even pushed back.

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The corpse tide, which had been advancing without letup, already breaking through three defensive lines and pressing close beneath the city wall, began to be suppressed — even pushed back out.

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But even so, the corpse tide's attacks showed no sign of dispersing. Instead, they grew even more frenzied.

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Yet even so, the corpse tide's offensive showed not the slightest sign of falling apart — on the contrary, it grew even more frenzied.

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In the rear, dozens of new Hundred Eyes had entered the rocket launchers' range, and scarlet energy beams were beginning to gather.

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Behind it, dozens of new "Hundred Eyes" had already entered the rocket launchers' range, scarlet energy beams beginning to converge.

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"All units! Focus fire on the Hundred Eyes! Blow every last one of them to hell!" Zhang Wu's roar echoed in everyone's ears.

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"All units! Focus fire on the Hundred Eyes! Blow them all to hell!" Zhang Wu's roar echoed in everyone's ears.

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On the city wall, squad members carrying man-portable air-defense missiles coordinated their fire at the mutants in the sky that were constantly launching suicidal charges.

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On the city wall, soldiers carrying man-portable air-defense missiles coordinated fire against the mutants that kept making death charges from the air.

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While reloading, Fang Yi shouted at the frightened people beside him: "Move the ammunition faster! Don't just stand there!"

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Fang Yi shouted at the frightened people beside him as he reloaded: "Move the ammunition faster! Don't just stand there!"

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Behind the position, members of the production sequence were transporting ammunition supplies to the city wall at top speed, while several doctors organized emergency teams to send the seriously wounded to the rear.

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Behind the position, the production sequence members were transporting ammunition resupplies to the wall at top speed, while several doctors organized emergency teams to carry the severely wounded to the rear.

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They all knew it: the enemy had started fighting desperately, so they had to keep up!

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They all understood: the enemy had started fighting with everything they had, so they had to keep up.

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Hairui Biological, the blast epicenter.

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Hairui Biological — the core blast zone.

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The temporary high ground where Lin Yue, Chen Mo, and the others were located was also swept by the shock wave's aftermath. If they hadn't fallen back in advance and taken cover, they would likely have been tossed into the air, vehicles and all.

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The temporary high ground where Lin Yue, Chen Mo, and the others stood had also been grazed by the shock wave's aftermath. If they hadn't withdrawn in advance and found cover, both people and vehicles would have been sent flying.

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"Cough, cough... we made it..." Lin Yue poked his head out from behind cover and looked at the terrifying scene in the distance, which looked as if it had been gnawed by a colossal beast. His heart was still pounding with lingering fear.

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"Cough, cough... we made it..." Lin Yue poked his head out from behind cover and looked at the horrifying scene in the distance, as if a giant beast had taken a bite out of the earth. He was still shaken.

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The flesh blanket that had shielded the front of the egg sac had been blown to pieces, its thin fragments scattered across the scorched earth. Though they writhed madly, they clearly wouldn't be drawing back together anytime soon.

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The flesh blanket that had shielded the egg sac had been blasted into pieces. Thin fragments lay scattered across the scorched earth — writhing madly, yet clearly unable to come back together anytime soon.

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However, the giant flesh embryo still stood.

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However, the giant flesh embryo remained standing.

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Only, the sac-like structure on its surface had shattered, revealing the true body within—glowing with a dark-red fluorescence in the night.

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Only, the sac structure on its surface had shattered, revealing the true body within, glowing with dark red fluorescence under the night sky.

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And just then, everyone on the high ground's contamination monitors let out piercing alarms at the same time.

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And just then, the shield monitors of everyone on the high ground let out piercing alarms at the same time.

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Lin Yue looked down and saw the numbers on the dial jumping wildly.

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Lin Yue lowered his head. The numbers on the dial were jumping wildly.

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The numbers finally stopped at 99, not rising any further.

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The numbers finally stopped at 99. They didn't rise any further.

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At the same time, a bizarre sound resembling Sanskrit chanting rose without warning in everyone's ears.

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At the same time, a bizarre sound similar to Sanskrit chanting rose without warning in everyone's ears.

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But unlike the sacred chanting that brought serenity, this sound only made people feel unbearably sick, as if their brains were being churned into a uniform paste.

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But unlike the sacred chanting that brings peace to the mind, this sound only made people feel unbearably ill, as if their brains were being churned into a smooth paste.

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"Ah!" Several squad members with weaker willpower immediately clutched their heads and cried out in pain, their eyes bloodshot. Their teammates had to pin them down hard before they could barely calm down.

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"Ah!" Several team members with weaker wills immediately clutched their heads and cried out in pain, their eyes blood-red. It was only after their comrades pinned them down hard that they barely managed to calm down.

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At the same time, from within the split-open egg sac, a colossal humanoid silhouette slowly straightened up.

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At the same time, from the cracked-open egg sac, an enormous humanoid silhouette slowly straightened up.

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Its height was estimated at over twenty meters. Its entire body was dark red, its flesh seemingly formed from countless twisted masses of muscle and sinew.

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Its height was estimated at over twenty meters. Its whole body was dark red, its frame seemingly woven from countless twisted flesh and sinews.

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It had no head. In its place was an indescribable, "lotus"-like structure seemingly composed of countless open mouths and eyes.

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It had no head. In its place was an unnameable structure resembling a "lotus," seemingly composed of countless open mouths and eyes.

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A single glance was enough to make one's stomach churn and the urge to vomit well up.

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A single glance was enough to stir revulsion in one's heart, to make one want to vomit.

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It extended a colossal arm of pure flesh and casually beckoned.

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It extended a giant arm made of pure flesh and blood and casually beckoned.

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The fragments of that flesh blanket on the ground suddenly, as if summoned, converged madly on its body and clung to it.

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In an instant, the flesh blanket fragments on the ground, as if summoned, madly gathered toward its body and climbed up onto it.

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In an instant, the flesh fragments pieced themselves back together, eventually forming a flesh cloak resembling a kasaya across the bizarre monster's shoulders and back.

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In the blink of an eye, the fragments joined together once more, ultimately forming a flesh cloak resembling a monk's kasaya over the bizarre monster's shoulders and back.

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"Holy shit!" Lin Yue stared at that towering, sky-scraping figure and felt his worldview being refreshed once again. "What the hell do these monsters... usually eat to grow this big?"

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"Holy shit!" Lin Yue stared at that towering figure that seemed to prop up heaven and earth, feeling his worldview being refreshed yet again. "What the hell... do these monsters usually eat to grow this big?"

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"Open fire! Keep firing!" Immediately after, he practically roared out the order.

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"Fire! Keep firing!" Immediately after, he practically roared the order.

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The rocket launchers fired another volley!

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The rocket launchers volleyed once more!

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However, those rockets—powerful enough to split mountains and crack rocks—only blasted open puffs of blood mist when they struck its body. After the smoke and dust cleared, those wounds had already healed.

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Yet those shells, powerful enough to split mountains and crack boulders, only burst into clouds of blood mist when they hit its body. Once the smoke cleared, those wounds had already healed.

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"That's impossible, isn't it?" a gunner muttered.

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"That can't be..." a gunner muttered.

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Even more terrifying was that with every step it took, the zombies on the surrounding ground, as if answering some kind of call, surged madly toward it, actively offering themselves to be devoured and absorbed by the flesh tissue at its feet.

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Even more terrifying was that with every step it took, the zombies all around on the ground, as if obeying some sort of summons, surged madly toward it and willingly let the flesh tissue at its feet devour and absorb them.

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And as it devoured the corpse tide, its body was actually still swelling at a rate visible to the naked eye!

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And as it devoured the corpse tide, its body was actually swelling at a rate visible to the naked eye!

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Watching that godlike monster strolling through the gunfire, its body growing ever larger, Lin Yue and Chen Mo couldn't help but feel an emotion called despair welling up in their hearts.

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Watching that godlike monster strolling through the gunfire, its body growing steadily larger, Lin Yue and Chen Mo couldn't help an emotion called despair rising in their hearts.

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Was this... really something humanity could defeat?

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This... was this really something human beings could defeat?