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第33章 任務完成

人口從二十餘人驟然膨脹到近一百多人,帶來的並不僅僅只有好處。 還有混亂。 食堂里,因為對於食物匱乏的恐懼,引起的排隊爭執;宿舍樓里,因房間位置產生的口角。 甚至還有一些終於滿血復活的“斯文人們”,幹活之餘眼神閃爍,不知道在盤算些什麼。 噪音、茫然、以及一絲絲躁動,如同無形的塵埃,開始在避難所的空氣中瀰漫。 好在這場混亂並未能持續太久。 “王海先生,這裡禁止吸煙。” 正在吞雲吐霧的王海手一抖,煙頭差點掉在地上。 他驚恐地抬頭,看向走廊盡頭的攝像頭,那冰冷的電子眼彷彿正凝視著他。 他手裡的身份卡傳來冰冷的電子音,正是庄生的聲音。 “對不起!庄生先生!我不知道。”他手忙腳亂地將煙踩滅。 【沒關係,以後注意。】 一名正試圖撬開一間上儲藏室房門的男人,動作猛地頓住。 【陳樹,你在做什麼?】 【怎麼?驚喜地發現這條路線好像沒有監控?】 陳樹嚇得一屁股坐在地上,臉色慘白。 【避難所所有物資均由我統一調配,私自盜竊行為等同於背叛。】 【警告不會再有第二次了,請你好自為之。】 冰冷的聲音沒有絲毫情緒,卻比任何怒罵都更具威懾力。 一來二去,整個避難所迅速恢復了井然有序。 惶恐不安的,會被提醒自己該做什麼;想投機取巧的,會收到最精準的警告。 而那些聰明的,知道守規矩的,則被默默記下,列入了“可靠人員”的觀察名單。 凌宇的意志如同一張無形的大網,籠罩著整個核電站,並經由身份卡流淌至每個人身邊。 處理一百多人的信息流,對他而言甚至算不上一絲負擔。 在電站內部,反應堆每時每刻產生的海量運行數據,他都能輕易處理,更何況是這些簡單的社會行為信息。 偽裝成AI? 凌宇從不為此感到虧心,因為AI哪有他厲害啊! 通過之前的身份卡的登記信息,以及這兩天的觀察,他對於這批新成員也有了更多的認識。 一百一十八名新人,年齡組成可以說極不平衡。 最小的是一個十四歲的男孩叫李朝陽,凌宇對他有印象,就是之前被瘦猴打的那個倒霉孩子。 此外還有3個未成年,十六歲的趙明和李鳴以及十五歲的陳海,都很沉默寡言。 年紀最大的是五十五歲的老工人,名叫周虎,年紀不小,但身體卻還算硬朗。 其餘的大部分就全是二三十歲的青壯年了,男女比例大約在三比一。 這很合理,在這種末世中,老人和小孩本就沒有什麼優勢可言。 尤其是小孩子,老人或許還有經驗的優勢,而小孩什麼都沒有。 刀哥等人顯然不是什麼良善之輩,就更不可能帶太多老年人或者孩子了。 末世之中,像張靜老師那種最後選擇儘可能護住幾個小孩的情況才是真的特例。 除此以外,這批倖存者的職業構成也是五花八門,有退伍的保安,有水電維修工,有卡車司機,廚師等等…… 而最大的驚喜,來自於醫療人員的補充。 “劉哥,孫哥,晴姐,麗姐,以後避難所就全靠你們了!” 在廠區臨時改造的醫療室內,蘇晚激動地握著一個穿著白大褂的中年醫生的手,眼眶裡閃爍著感動的淚光。 這批新人里,居然有三名醫生和一名護士! 為首的中年醫生叫劉明遠,帶著一副黑框眼鏡,氣質沉穩。 旁邊稍顯年輕的女醫生叫方晴,而那位三十歲左右的護士則叫王麗。 另一位年輕些的男醫生叫孫浩,此刻正好奇地打量著醫療室里那些遠超普通診所的設備。 “蘇教授,你太客氣了,”劉明遠顯然有些不適應,推了推眼鏡,“我們也就是普通的醫生,水平一般,很多條件也不具備……” “再一般也比我強啊!”蘇晚打斷他,熱淚盈眶地拍著他的肩膀,“我是搞生物研究的!不是治人的!” 她指著自己的黑眼圈,一臉的生無可戀:“正所謂術業有專攻,你們要有自信!表現再差,也不可能比我更差了!” 徹底甩掉了“兼職醫生”這個沉重包袱后,蘇晚整個人都煥發了新的光彩。 蘇晚雖然是研究生物的,但是研究生物和專業研究人類完全是兩碼事。 這些天為了應對可能的緊急情況,拿著醫學書逼自己速成的蘇晚算是再一次開始慶幸自己當初沒有選擇學醫。 倒不是覺得有多難,純粹是沒興趣。 在她眼裡,人哪有形態萬千的微生物可愛? 再說了,培養皿里的微生物死多少她都不心疼,人死了,那心理負擔可就太重了。 總而言之,有了真正的醫生坐鎮,避難所的生存保障能力無疑是上了一個大台階。 凌宇迅速將這些擁有專業技能的人員進行歸類,分配到最合適的崗位。 電工趙海生身邊多了不少同事,廚房也迎來了真正的大廚,整個避難所的後勤系統開始變得更加專業和高效。 而那些暫時沒有能用的上的技能的倖存者,則被統一劃分為了外勤人員。 下午四點。 一場全體會議在修葺一新的大食堂召開。 凌宇沒有搞什麼全息投影,只是通過大屏幕和無處不在的廣播,宣布了避難所外勤小組的新架構。 【為提高效率,應對未來的挑戰,所有戰鬥及外勤人員將重組為三個大隊。】 屏幕上,張武、林越、沈雁三人的頭像和名字清晰地顯示出來。 【第一行動組,組長張武。負責對外探索、物資搜集、倖存者搜救等一切長途外勤任務。】 【第二行動組,組長林越。負責執行特殊工業任務,包括但不限於設備運輸、生產線搭建、以及未來工業區的開拓。】 【第三行動組,組長沈雁。負責避難所本體防禦、周邊區域肅清與擴張、防禦工事修築與升級。】 【接下來,是各組人員名單,請念到名字的成員去對應的組長處報到。】 三個行動組主要針對的是當前最為關鍵的三個問題,物資消耗,主線任務的完成,以及避難所安全性的提高。 隨著避難所人員的增加,原先怎麼吃都夠了的食物儲備,顯然已經沒那麼夠了。 所以,在實現自給自足之前,搜尋食物等物資的進度不能停下,與此同時,這一組也擔負著繼續搜尋倖存者的任務。 凌宇不相信,偌大一個遠江市,真就只有他們這麼一點人活下來了。 刀哥逃亡中都能撿到一百多號人,沒道理他不能找到更多倖存者。 此外,加工生產線的搬運也迫在眉睫,手裡沒文明點,凌宇始終有些焦慮。 10000文明點,越早落袋為安越好。 最後,如果想建立食物自給自足的生產線,那外面的土地是勢必要利用上的。 那麼就不能放任,那些四處遊盪的零散喪屍們繼續遊盪了。 將避難所的防線向外擴大,肅清遊盪喪屍的任務也完全可以開始了。 這就是人多的好處,可以同時開始多個任務,而不互相耽誤。 …… 伴隨著引擎的低沉轟鳴,一架“長空之刃”2型無人機懸停在空中,機腹下的吊艙探出四條堅固的合金纜繩,穩穩鉤住下方廠房內早已被拆卸打包好的軸承研磨機。 嗡—— 科技含量不詳的無人機功率提升,發出撕裂空氣的嘯叫。 重達數噸的機器被平穩地吊起,精準地落在一輛重型卡車的平板拖車上。 “一組固定完畢!重複,一組固定完畢!”卡車旁,幾名倖存者立刻上前,用粗大的鎖鏈和絞盤將機器牢牢固定。 廠房門口,林越手持步槍,眼神銳利如刀,警惕地掃視著周圍廢棄的廠區。 他們這一組外勤人員總共四十人,是人數最多的一組。 此時除了負責核心吊裝作業的十人以外,其餘人以三人為一單位,沿著返迴避難所的公路呈線性布防,負責清理沿途遊盪的喪屍,確保運輸路線的暢通。 【各單位注意,一組設備已裝車,準備轉移至二號廠房。】 凌宇的聲音通過身份卡,清晰地傳入每個人耳中。 為了這次“工業的起點”任務,凌宇投入了六台安防單元配合清理路面,兩架“長空之刃”無人機保證制空權。 算是出動了目前能出動的全部安保力量了。 “收到。”林越言簡意賅地回復,同時對身邊的隊員打了個手勢,“按計劃推進,保持警惕。” 行動開始的第一個小時,順利得超乎想象。 在凌宇的統一調度下,整個團隊並沒有出現什麼大問題,就如同一台精密運轉的機器一樣高效。 無人機負責吊裝與空中警戒,哨兵機器人巡邏支援,人類小隊則負責處理零星的威脅和固定設備。 【報告!C點哨崗發現小股屍群,約三十隻,正在接近。】一名布防在外的倖存者聲音傳來,帶著一絲緊張。 【收到,】凌宇的聲音波瀾不驚,【請配合哨兵三號處理。】 話音剛落,林越面前的戰術平板上,代表C點的監控畫面自動彈出。 只見一台哨兵三號手臂上的速射機槍噴出火舌。 噠噠噠——! 密集的彈雨瞬間將沖在最前面的幾隻喪屍撕成碎片,後續的屍群甚至沒能衝進五十米範圍,就在精準的點射下一一倒下。 “我靠……這火力!”即使不是第一次看見了,依舊還是有新人忍不住低聲驚嘆。 這樣的插曲時不時在道路旁發生,但是得益於之前清理的夠耐心細緻,最後並沒有什麼意料之外的大危機出現。 【二組設備吊裝完成。】 【三組準備……】 一切都在計劃之中。 設備被一台一台搬起運走。 然而,就在要吊裝最後一台高精度數控車床時,異變陡生。 【警報!哨兵7號偵測到高能生物反應!請提高警惕!】 凌宇的電子音第一次帶上了一絲急促。 “砰!” 隨後,一聲刺耳地金屬碰撞摩擦聲響起。 林越心中一凜,立刻看向哨兵7號看守的方向。 只見,一向刀槍不入的哨兵機器人,胸口的裝甲竟被撕開一個巨大的口子,內部的線路火花四濺,受損極為嚴重。 而這整個過程,快到監控甚至都沒能捕捉到清晰的影像。 “敵襲!”林越大喊道,“所有人注意,立刻收縮防禦!” “庄生!那是什麼?!”林越對著身份卡喊道。 【稍等一下……正在解析錄像……】 凌宇現在也是‘滿頭大汗’,意識中不斷回播哨兵7號剛才的錄像畫面。 能夠讓哨兵都反應不過來的東西,這也太誇張了吧? 【……找到了!】 畫面立刻傳送到所有人的顯示設備上。 那是一個頗為詭異的生物,通體呈骨白色,形態類人,但四肢卻顯得極為修長,背後似乎還有一對收攏的、如同羽翼般的結構。 剛才就是它以一種不可思議的速度襲擊了哨兵7號,不僅速度快,破壞力也很驚人。 畫面定格的瞬間,整個通訊頻道陷入了死寂。 那詭異的骨白色身影,那修長而充滿爆發力的四肢,以及背後那對收攏的、彷彿藝術品般的羽翼結構,給在場的所有人帶來了巨大的視覺衝擊和心理壓迫。 【快撤!】 凌宇冰冷果決的聲音,通過身份卡在每個人的耳邊炸響,打破了這短暫的凝滯。 “可是……機床!”林越下意識地喊道。 放棄了,這次行動的就等於失敗了。 【以後再說,命更重要!所有人,立刻上車,放棄所有非必要裝備,全速撤離!】 凌宇的指令不容置喙,【一組負責斷後,二組、三組掩護技術人員上車!快!】 他很清楚,就連哨兵七號沒能反應過來對方的攻擊,普通人就更不可能是它的對手了。 這根本不是林越他們能處理的敵人。 然而,就在眾人開始收縮隊形,準備登上卡車時,那道白色的身影再度出現了。 它如同一道白色的閃電,從一棟廢棄廠房的陰影中射出,但目標卻不是地面上的人群,而是半空中的“長空之刃”2型無人機。 它似乎把無人機看成了一種更有價值的大型獵物。 呼——! 尖銳的破空聲響起。 好在凌宇早已將大部分注意力都集中在了這片區域,幾乎是在對方動的瞬間,就操控無人機猛地拔升高度。 白色身影的利爪擦著無人機的起落架劃過,帶出一串刺眼的火花。 一擊不中,它背後的羽翼猛然展開! 羽翼振動,它在空中完成了一個不可思議的銳角轉彎,速度不減反增,再次撲向無人機。 這一幕,讓通過攝像頭看到畫面的凌宇,反倒鬆了口氣。 他就怕後者不講“武德”,衝進人群里開無雙,那損失可就大了。 現在這樣反而好辦了。 無人機在凌宇的操控下,將機動性發揮到了極致。 時而急速攀升,時而俯衝甩尾,機腹下的激光武器不斷尋找著發射角度。 但那白色怪物的速度與敏捷性實在太過驚人。 它就像一個最頂級的空中掠食者,每一次撲擊、每一次變向,都帶著一種殘酷而優雅的美感,總能以毫釐之差躲開激光的鎖定。 凌宇的意識中,海量的數據流正在飛速滾動。 試圖找到對面的那個怪物哪怕一絲的破綻,然而他的破綻卻先一步被抓住了。 即使無人機的動力極其強勁,但也禁不住凌宇如此極限的壓榨,沒過幾秒,和對面纏鬥的無人機就發生了失速。 對面的怪物顯然不會錯過這個機會,它的眼中閃過一絲人性化的貪婪,猛地加速,一個俯衝抱住了無人機的機身。 它的雙臂肌肉虯結,利爪深深嵌入無人機的外殼,發出令人牙酸的“咯吱”聲。 然後,它張開嘴,露出滿口細密的、如同鋼針般的牙齒,狠狠地朝著無人機咬了下去! 然後…… 砰! 一團絢爛的電火花在它嘴邊炸開,高壓電流瞬間流遍它的全身。 白色怪物渾身劇烈一顫,發出一聲尖銳的嘶鳴。 就是現在! 早已完成了鎖定的另一台無人機精準地發射出了一道猩紅的高能激光。 嗡—— 刺目的激光,精準地從天而降,瞬間洞穿了白色怪物的右半身體。 然而令凌宇沒想到的是,如此高能的激光,居然只能在對方地翅膀上燒灼出一個窟窿。 “嘰——!!!” 前所未有的劇痛,讓白色怪物又發出一聲痛呼,但與此同時,它的眼裡閃過一絲恐懼。 它鬆開利爪,毫不猶豫地選擇了放棄。 它猛地一振殘破的翅翼,拖著受傷的身軀,在園區的廠房樓頂跳躍著狼狽地消失在了遠方的天際線。 這整個過程甚至沒超過一分鐘。 【威脅已解除,計劃改變,請立刻完成裝機工作。】 凌宇的聲音響起,聽不出任何情緒,但林越卻能想象得到,這位無所不能的“AI”剛才也經歷了一場怎樣驚險的搏鬥。 “收到!” …… 返回曙光避難所的路途,異常的沉默。 那白色“天使”的身影,像一根刺,扎在了每個人的心頭。 這種強大而危險的生物,讓所有人都感到了深入骨髓的恐懼。 回到電站,厚重的合金大門在身後緩緩關閉,所有人才真正鬆了口氣,一種回家的踏實感油然而生。 劫後餘生的疲憊感涌了上來,但還沒到休息的時候。 林越立刻組織人手,在幾名原車隊里懂機械的老工人的指導下,開始卸載和安裝那些來之不易的設備。 “這個地腳螺栓的力矩要擰到三百牛米,不能多也不能少。”名叫周虎的老工人,雖然年過半百,但說起專業知識卻神采奕奕,聲音洪亮。 “還有這個水平儀,要對準!差一絲一毫,以後出的軸承就都是廢品!” 好在這批新來的倖存者中,有好幾位懂這些工作的人員。 在他們的幫助下,之後的安裝調試工作也沒有出現太大的問題。 第二天,當第一個軸承成功被製造出來時,被改造的臨時廠房內,響起了一片壓抑的歡呼。 凌宇的意識,也在此刻收到了他期待已久的迴響。 【叮!】 【主線任務三:工業的起點,已完成!】 【任務評價:優秀(在面臨高階變異體威脅下,以零傷亡代價完成任務)。】 【獎勵核算中……評級提升……隱藏款圖紙……】 【獲得文明點:10000。】 【解鎖建築:初級工業製造加工中心x1,請選擇具體工業類型。】 【解鎖圖紙:初級工業製造加工中心圖紙×1,地脈勘探戰術全能車圖紙x1 。】 【叮!檢測到工業製造中心已建成,觸發主線任務四:工業的原料。】 【任務描述:流水線已具雛形,然機器轟鳴需要原料餵養。請宿主建立至少一條穩定的礦物採集線,並使初級工業製造中心實現滿負荷運轉。】 【任務獎勵:文明點50000,解鎖礦材冶鍊中心×1,藍圖×1。】 看著不斷刷新的系統提示,凌宇總算鬆了一口氣。 而當看到那個意料之外的地脈勘探戰術全能車的圖紙時,他更是眼前一亮。
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The population had suddenly ballooned from a little over twenty people to nearly a hundred-plus, and that brought more than just benefits.
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The population had suddenly ballooned from a little over twenty people to more than a hundred, and that brought more than just benefits.
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In the cafeteria, fear of food shortages sparked quarrels over the serving line; in the dormitory building, arguments broke out over room assignments.
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In the cafeteria, fear of food shortages sparked quarrels over the serving line; in the dormitory, arguments broke out over room assignments.
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There were even some of the “cultured folk,” fully revived and back to their old ways, shooting shifty glances while they worked, scheming about who knew what.
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There were even some of the “cultured folk,” fully revived and back to their old ways, casting shifty glances as they worked and scheming about who knew what.
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Noise, confusion, and a faint undercurrent of restlessness spread through the shelter’s air like invisible dust.
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Fortunately, that chaos didn’t last long.
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Wang Hai, who had been puffing away, flinched, and the cigarette butt nearly fell from his hand.
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“I’m sorry! Mr. Zhuangsheng! I didn’t know.” He frantically stamped out the cigarette.
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“I’m sorry, Mr. Zhuangsheng! I didn’t know.” He frantically stamped out the cigarette.
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A man who was trying to pry open the door of a locked storage room froze mid-motion.
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Chen Shu was so frightened that he plopped down onto the ground, his face pale.
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Inside the station, he could easily handle the massive torrent of operational data the reactor generated every moment—compared to that, these simple bits of social information were nothing.
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Inside the station, he could easily handle the massive torrent of operational data generated by the reactor every moment. Compared to that, these simple bits of social information were nothing.
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Pretending to be an AI? Ling Yu never felt a pang of guilt about it, because what AI could possibly be as capable as him!
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Pretending to be an AI? Ling Yu never felt a pang of guilt about it. What AI could possibly be as capable as him?
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The youngest was a fourteen-year-old boy named Li Chaoyang. Ling Yu remembered him—he was the unlucky kid who had been beaten up by Skinny Monkey earlier.
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The youngest was a fourteen-year-old boy named Li Chaoyang. Ling Yu remembered him—he was the unlucky kid Skinny Monkey had beaten up earlier.
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There were three more minors: sixteen-year-olds Zhao Ming and Li Ming, and fifteen-year-old Chen Hai, all of them quiet and reserved.
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In this end-times world, cases like Teacher Zhang Jing, who chose at the very end to protect as many children as she could, were truly the exception.
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In this end-times world, cases like Teacher Zhang Jing, who had chosen at the very end to protect as many children as she could, were truly the exception.
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Beyond that, the professional makeup of these survivors was a mixed bag: there were ex-military security guards, plumbing and electrical repairmen, truck drivers, cooks, and so on...
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Beyond that, the professional makeup of these survivors was a mixed bag: ex-military security guards, plumbing and electrical repairmen, truck drivers, cooks, and so on...
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The leading middle-aged doctor was Liu Mingyuan. He wore black-rimmed glasses and carried a steady, composed demeanor.
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The slightly younger female doctor beside him was Fang Qing, and the nurse around thirty years old was Wang Li.
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The other, younger male doctor was Sun Hao, who at the moment was curiously inspecting the medical room’s equipment, which far surpassed that of an ordinary clinic.
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“Professor Su, you’re too kind,” Liu Mingyuan said, clearly a bit uncomfortable as he adjusted his glasses. “We’re just ordinary doctors—average skill, and there are many conditions we don’t even have...”
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“Professor Su, you’re too kind,” Liu Mingyuan said, clearly a bit uncomfortable as he adjusted his glasses. “We’re just ordinary doctors—our skills are average, and there are many conditions we don’t even have...”
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Although Su Wan did research in biology, studying organisms and professionally studying human beings were two completely different things.
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Although Su Wan conducted research in biology, studying organisms and professionally studying human beings were two completely different things.
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These past days, cramming medical textbooks to handle possible emergencies had made Su Wan once again grateful that she had never chosen to study medicine.
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These past few days, cramming medical textbooks to handle possible emergencies had made Su Wan once again grateful that she had never chosen to study medicine.
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It wasn’t that she found it hard—she simply had no interest.
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In short, with real doctors in place, the shelter’s survival support capabilities had undoubtedly been taken up a big step.
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In short, with real doctors in place, the shelter’s survival-support capabilities had undoubtedly taken a big step forward.
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Ling Yu quickly categorized the people with professional skills and assigned them to the most fitting positions.
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Ling Yu quickly categorized the people with professional skills and assigned them to the positions that suited them best.
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With the increase in shelter personnel, the food reserves that had once been more than enough no matter how much was eaten now clearly wouldn’t stretch as far.
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With the increase in shelter personnel, the food reserves that had once been more than enough no matter how much people ate now clearly wouldn’t last as long.
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Therefore, until Self-Sufficiency was achieved, the pace of searching for food and other supplies could not stop. At the same time, this team also bore the task of continuing to search for survivors.
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Therefore, until Self-Sufficiency was achieved, the search for food and other supplies could not stop. At the same time, this team also bore the task of continuing to search for survivors.
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This was the benefit of having more people—multiple tasks could be pursued at once without interfering with each other.
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This was the benefit of having more people—multiple tasks could be pursued at once without interfering with one another.
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At the factory entrance, Lin Yue held his rifle, his eyes sharp as blades, sweeping a wary gaze across the abandoned factory grounds around him.
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At the factory entrance, Lin Yue held his rifle, his eyes sharp as blades as he swept a wary gaze across the abandoned factory grounds around him.
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The first hour of the operation went so smoothly it exceeded all expectations.
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The first hour of the operation went so smoothly that it exceeded all expectations.
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There, the Sentinel Robot—normally impervious to blades and bullets—had the armor on its chest torn open with a massive gash, sparks flying from the internal wiring. The damage was severe.
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There, the Sentinel Robot—normally impervious to blades and bullets—had the armor on its chest torn open by a massive gash, sparks flying from the internal wiring. The damage was severe.
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It was a bizarre creature, bone-white all over, humanoid in form, but with extremely elongated limbs. Behind it, there seemed to be a pair of folded, wing-like structures.
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It was a bizarre creature, bone-white all over and humanoid in form, but with extremely elongated limbs. Behind it, there seemed to be a pair of folded, wing-like structures.
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It seemed to regard the UAV as a more valuable large prey.
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It seemed to regard the UAV as more valuable prey.
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It was like a supreme aerial predator. Every strike, every change of direction carried a kind of cruel, elegant beauty, and it always evaded the laser’s lock by a hair’s breadth.
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It was like a supreme aerial predator. Every strike and every change of direction carried a kind of cruel, elegant beauty, and it always evaded the laser’s lock by a hair’s breadth.
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Only once they were back at the power station, with the heavy alloy doors slowly closing behind them, did everyone truly breathe a sigh of relief, a grounded sense of coming home welling up inside them.
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Only once they were back at the power station, with the heavy alloy doors slowly closing behind them, did everyone truly breathe a sigh of relief. A grounded sense of coming home welled up inside them.
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And when he saw that unexpected blueprint for the Earth Vein Survey Tactical All-Rounder Vehicle, his eyes lit up even more.
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And when he saw the unexpected blueprint for the Earth Vein Survey Tactical All-Rounder Vehicle, his eyes lit up even more.
QA findings
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No deterministic QA findings
Provider
Openai
Model
GPT-5.6 Luna
Tokens
10,681
Cost
$0.00734420